DivinexSolace

This is going to be a critique, and I hope you don't take it harshly- you're a much more successful artist than myself and this is the only piece I've looked at of yours.

I want to see what it would look like if you re-drew this in 5 years. I feel like you were almost there, but not quite, there's something missing. You have dynamic character and colour and vision, but it feels too tight and too flat to me compositionally. The proportions are a little strange and the foreshortening is off, too. It appears that you hadn't yet studied real anatomy (correct me if I'm wrong, it's just what I see) or still life, so there doesn't seem to any structure or volume to your figures or objects. It looks like talented guesswork. I think your art would dramatically improve if you brushed up on still life and figure study.